Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 6 November 2020

Thank You Letter For Camp

 40 Campion rd 

Gisborne


Dear Jason 

I am writing to you to say thank you for  looking after me at camp.I liked how you made sure I was fine after every activity. So thank you for looking after me at camp.


One of the highlights was the rock climbing wall. It was really fun. The reason i liked that was because when i climbed up you  brought me down really really fast and that was really cool. Also you looked after me at the start of camp when i wasn't feeling like going on the big trip to tui ridge in rotorua.


So thank you for coming to tui ridge and looking after me as well as making sure everyone else was fine. So  thanks for looking after me at camp. I really appreciated it!

Sincerely 

Elena



Wednesday, 23 September 2020

Weta research

 The weta is a very interesting species. They waugh up to 70 grams which is like 3 small mice. The weta can not harm, they have no venom and only the fully grown adult weta can draw blood. The weta was named god of ugly things.


The weta have slime scales also known as the back of the wetas body.Two of the legs are attached to  the  tummy of the weta. They have two beady eyes to help them see at night. They are nocturnal and have ears on their knees.they also have no sense of smell they use their antennae.


The weta live on the north of new zealand some can be found in tall kauri forests.They can also be found in little holes in the ground.

The weta have something called counter shading which means the insect or animal are darker on the top of their body and lighter on the bottom. This helps with camouflage and hiding from predators. They mult 10 times in 18 months. After they have multed they eat the skin I know right its gross!!


Monday, 14 September 2020

Is Climate Change Actually Bad For The Planet?

We were learning to write a persuasive text. The topic that i chose climate change because it is a very serious matter.  i found it very interesting as well. i found it easy to think of the introduction but the rest of the speech took a little bit of time. i found it hard to think of my second argument.


 Is climate change actually bad for the planet?


Is Climate change actually bad for the environment? Yes, Climate change is very bad for the environment. It is without a doubt that climate change is bad for the environment because it is heating up the earth, melting glaciers, rising sea levels.


Firstly, climate change doesn't just have an 

impact on the animals has a huge impact on us as humans. The weather can become very hot and trees can catch fire like how it did in australia. It destroys the environment by heating up the earth and making huge fires. The way to stop this is to stop using too many fossil fuels because it is basically heating up the earth.as if you had a fire under a pot.


The weather can become very hot and trees can catch fire. the sea level will rise when the glaciers melt and that will flood the city's. The glaciers will melt and that will slowly take away the polar bears and penguins habitat. 


The sea level rises about 0.13 milameters every year.

That means in about 70 years it will have been raised by 0.18-0.59 milameteres. The sea level will someday flood the earth.

Fossil fuels is the thing that is causing all these problems fossil fuels run cars and factories and many more. The United states of america use coal,oil and natrual gases for 81% total energy.

Also coal alone provides most of the electricity. 


In conclusion I believe that climate change should be stopped so that the sea levels don't rise and the glaciers don’t melt and also so the earth does not heat up. So do the earth a favour and stop using fossil fuels.



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Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing.


Tuesday, 16 June 2020

Cuz Story Ending

in class we were predicting what it we thought was going to happen and this is my opinion.
i found it hard to think of verbs.
i found it easy to put adjectives in my piece of writing.


Cuz Ending
How much longer cuz i dunno cuz we have been at this for like 2 hours.
Yeah i know maybe we should stop now ok sure .
Huia slumped her body down beside a tree. Ah cuz what do  we got to eat  ummm we have some
huhu grubs and yeah that's all.
River reached over to huia mhhhh it tastes like peanut butter.
The next morning river woke up to a bird pecking at his head  uhh get of you stupid bird ah cuz
come on let's go
uhh groand huia come on ugg i am soaked yeah me to well when the sun comes out we will dry ok.
Do you think we should stop now it's getting dark yeah we should wait cuz what is that umm dunno 
it it it's a cabin what where there oh come on quik open the door the nice warm air hit there skin
uhh whos there it is just us we won't  hurt you oh oh hi wait what are you guys doing in my cabin
oh umm we got lost we have been here for days with not alot of food or water oh well what's your
name oh my name is river and my name is huia oh well my name is Carl umm you guys hungry yes yes
we are .ok i will make you guys something  so you guys were eating slugs and stuff well yeah we were
as river slurped up his noodles mhh can i have some more well what about some moose what you got a
moose yeah you can have yes please exclaimed huia oh accwally no you catch your own one alright ok
this gear is itchy ok well when have to be patient and wait bang woah i got it while you guys were
bawling i was aiming at one nice well i will cook it up for dinner. Mhhhhhhh this is so nice alright
i will take you guys home.



THE END






Monday, 8 June 2020

2020 lockdown

i found it hard to think of verbs.
i found it easy to think of adjectives.


Tap tap tap as I tapped on the window sill. I was in my room at home by myself because of covid 19 Ugh I am so bored I don't know what to do. oh could play lego no i could write a list of things i would like to accomplish yeah umm first would probably be the periodic table then it could be my 3 x times tables oh and also i could try finish my massive space book. Ok let's write my list ... and there we go ok now what should i do now. Oh i still need to go on to my class it is on now 1 hour later 8 Now what do i do alright i am going to learn up to um number 33/Arsenic on the periodic table There's Hydrogen,Helium Lithium beryllium boron carbon everywhere nitrogen all through the air and oxygen so we can breathe fluorine for our pretty teeth Neon to light up the signs sodium for salty times magnesium aluminium silicon phosphorus and sulfur chlorine and argon potassium and calcium so you grow strong scandium titanium vanadium and chromium and manganese this is the periodic table noble gases stable halogens and alkali react aggressively each period we see new outer shells while electrons are added moving to the right iron is the 26 and cobalt nickel coins you get copper zinc and gallium germanium and arsenic and then were done . Now i am bored again umm i could play fortnite yeah i will alright ok ohh gold tac nice Hey Giacomo i found sky i will eliminate her ok you have the grappler i will have the scar 10 minutes later ‘’Yes we got the dub ok i am going to get of now bye’’ Umm i am going to do some baking now hmmm what should i make i know anzac cupcakes that will be yum ok 2 cups of flour ½ teaspoons of salt ….. Now we put them in the oven and there we go what should i do while i wait i will just read oh they are ready now yum they are so nice i went in to grab another one ah they are hot so i slowly grabbed one with a tissue yum ok now i am going to watch netflix then Disney plus ok let's watch star wars. 3 hours later ok lets just finish of some work and listen to spotify. 

 THE END

Thursday, 4 June 2020

Autumn Cinquain Poem


Autumn
Radiant,Crushed,
srunching,Gravitate,Blowing,
stacking up the radiant leaves.
Fall 


today i was learning to write a cinquain poem about autumn.
i found it hard to find a synonomn for crunch cause they all thought i was talking about  someone crunching food. I found it easy to find a word for stacking.

Friday, 27 March 2020

Swimming Sports

I found it hard to put in adjectives. I found it easy to put in verbs.

Splash splash as the cold water splashed on my face.On your marks get set !!GO!! Whiz Splash as a trail of white bubbles followed behind me i zipped to the front. Oh no I thought to myself I shouldn't have done that I just wasted all of my power now I am tired. That's ok i will just keep going and try my best to get to the front. Just keep going i thought to myself yes i made it to the finish line. Yes i finished it but i didn't come to a place so i tried.

Wednesday, 25 March 2020

Writing Learning Pathway

I found it easy to put in my interests.I found it hard to come up with the 2 goal.

Wednesday, 11 September 2019

My Speech



ko puketapu te maunga


ko Horouta te waka


ko Arai te uru te awa


ko Manatuke te marae


ko Rongowhakaata te iwi


ko Elena toku ingoa


















I am sure we've all heard about climate change but how is it affecting our planet





What is climate change. Well Climate change is the process of our planet heating


up. Earth has only





heated up by 1.c in the last century. But they call the amazon forest the lungs of the planet because %20





of the earth's oxygen comes from the amazon rainforest.


What causes climate





change? Burning fossil fuels. Over the past 150 years. Industrial countries have been burning fossil fuels





such as … oil,diesel cole,gas,petrol.


Also the sea levels have been rising because


the Glaciers are





melting the reason they are melting is climate change and climate change made the temperature of





the earth go up by 1.c


in a century. There will be more floods and sea life can't live in warm water


So in conclusion i





believe you should stop using fossil fuels. and my three main points are Glaciers melting and flooding low





ground houses . The animals are dying and if continue doing this the whole Amazon





rainforest could burn down and that would be %20 of the earth's oxygen completely gone

Thursday, 25 July 2019

Winter

Today I was learning write descriptively.
I enjoyed brainstorming adjectives, juicy verbs, and specific nouns.
I found it challenging to use a simile and personification.
My digital learning object shows an image of winter.
Next time I would add similes.


Frosty freezing branches waved through the wind. Stiff
icy grass cracked as people walked pass. Grey cloudy sky groaned in the wind.

Friday, 28 June 2019

Fizz,Foam and Froth

We are learning how to make things fizz,foam and froth.
I enjoyed doing the experiment because I love doing them I liked learning how to make things fizz, foam and froth.
I found it challenging to write about it.


Fizz, foam and froth
Have you ever wondered what makes fizz foam and froth? A physical change is when say there is water and you freeze it.I t will turn into ice. But you can change it back to water. A chemical change is irreversible. The first thing you need to do is to label the cups then pour in baking soda then add white vinegar. Leave it there for an hour. Then it should start to fizz foam and froth. It fizzes, foams and froths because of the baking soda and white vinegar. That is a chemical change.