i found it hard to think of verbs.
i found it easy to put adjectives in my piece of writing.
Cuz Ending
How much longer cuz i dunno cuz we have been at this for like 2 hours.
Yeah i know maybe we should stop now ok sure .
Huia slumped her body down beside a tree. Ah cuz what do we got to eat ummm we have some
huhu grubs and yeah that's all.
River reached over to huia mhhhh it tastes like peanut butter.
The next morning river woke up to a bird pecking at his head uhh get of you stupid bird ah cuz
come on let's go
uhh groand huia come on ugg i am soaked yeah me to well when the sun comes out we will dry ok.
Do you think we should stop now it's getting dark yeah we should wait cuz what is that umm dunno
it it it's a cabin what where there oh come on quik open the door the nice warm air hit there skin
uhh whos there it is just us we won't hurt you oh oh hi wait what are you guys doing in my cabin
oh umm we got lost we have been here for days with not alot of food or water oh well what's your
name oh my name is river and my name is huia oh well my name is Carl umm you guys hungry yes yes
we are .ok i will make you guys something so you guys were eating slugs and stuff well yeah we were
as river slurped up his noodles mhh can i have some more well what about some moose what you got a
moose yeah you can have yes please exclaimed huia oh accwally no you catch your own one alright ok
this gear is itchy ok well when have to be patient and wait bang woah i got it while you guys were
bawling i was aiming at one nice well i will cook it up for dinner. Mhhhhhhh this is so nice alright
i will take you guys home.
THE END
Yeah i know maybe we should stop now ok sure .
Huia slumped her body down beside a tree. Ah cuz what do we got to eat ummm we have some
huhu grubs and yeah that's all.
River reached over to huia mhhhh it tastes like peanut butter.
The next morning river woke up to a bird pecking at his head uhh get of you stupid bird ah cuz
come on let's go
uhh groand huia come on ugg i am soaked yeah me to well when the sun comes out we will dry ok.
Do you think we should stop now it's getting dark yeah we should wait cuz what is that umm dunno
it it it's a cabin what where there oh come on quik open the door the nice warm air hit there skin
uhh whos there it is just us we won't hurt you oh oh hi wait what are you guys doing in my cabin
oh umm we got lost we have been here for days with not alot of food or water oh well what's your
name oh my name is river and my name is huia oh well my name is Carl umm you guys hungry yes yes
we are .ok i will make you guys something so you guys were eating slugs and stuff well yeah we were
as river slurped up his noodles mhh can i have some more well what about some moose what you got a
moose yeah you can have yes please exclaimed huia oh accwally no you catch your own one alright ok
this gear is itchy ok well when have to be patient and wait bang woah i got it while you guys were
bawling i was aiming at one nice well i will cook it up for dinner. Mhhhhhhh this is so nice alright
i will take you guys home.
THE END
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