Thursday, 25 July 2019

Winter

Today I was learning write descriptively.
I enjoyed brainstorming adjectives, juicy verbs, and specific nouns.
I found it challenging to use a simile and personification.
My digital learning object shows an image of winter.
Next time I would add similes.


Frosty freezing branches waved through the wind. Stiff
icy grass cracked as people walked pass. Grey cloudy sky groaned in the wind.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Elena I am Arli and I like all the descriptive words you used great work.

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